The fragments I have (and they are fragments. It's not a continuous narrative) add up to about 18500 words. The story is solidly M rated for themes. There are references to rape but nothing explicit.
One thing I absolutely need help with is what various people would call each other (including how they'd think about each other). I'm wildly inconsistent throughout what I've written. I want honorifics, but I'm not great at knowing what different characters would use. My knowledge of Japanese would fit in a thimble.
I have the fragments up as Google docs and am willing to give you editing access if that works for you. Otherwise, I can send you the files. They're in Pages, but I can easily cut and paste into TextEdit which saves as a .rtf and can be opened by most word processors (just not LibreOffice).
There are certain developments in the story that I know I have to support better (and there's one fight scene I know I need that I'm not sure I can write).
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Re: RRK
Date: 2015-02-05 10:05 pm (UTC)One thing I absolutely need help with is what various people would call each other (including how they'd think about each other). I'm wildly inconsistent throughout what I've written. I want honorifics, but I'm not great at knowing what different characters would use. My knowledge of Japanese would fit in a thimble.
I have the fragments up as Google docs and am willing to give you editing access if that works for you. Otherwise, I can send you the files. They're in Pages, but I can easily cut and paste into TextEdit which saves as a .rtf and can be opened by most word processors (just not LibreOffice).
There are certain developments in the story that I know I have to support better (and there's one fight scene I know I need that I'm not sure I can write).