I think I've now hit the end of the scene in the Luke POV document. The question is whether or not what's going on in Merlin's head is obvious enough given that Luke doesn't quite get it.
I'm also not sure if this is a standalone in the arc or if it's the first chapter of something longer. I'm not convinced that it's going somewhere yet.
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Date: 2016-10-28 02:56 am (UTC)I'm also not sure if this is a standalone in the arc or if it's the first chapter of something longer. I'm not convinced that it's going somewhere yet.
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