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[the_rck]

Title: Rheotaxis chapter 19
Fandom: Weiss Kreuz
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Nagi/Yohji
Warnings: Swearing. References to past child sexual abuse. Nonconsensual sex. Bondage. Although I'm setting this a couple of years past the main series, Nagi's age (I am assuming that he's eighteen but still) combined with his actions may squick some people. Also, I'm ignoring Gluhen, Side B and the drama CDs, so don't expect this to be consistent with them.
Chapter Summary: Yohji meets his empathy teacher.

Chapter 19 at my website.
Chapter 19 at AO3.

I'm looking for a beta reader for the next chapter of this fic. I'm having trouble getting the flow of things right to include all the information that's needed. I'd be grateful to any volunteers.

Comments

[leorising1959.livejournal.com]

Wow, more Rheotaxis! So nice to see more of this story. I thought you did an admirable job with this part, especially with the limitations on sex and such that you have for your writing now.

I like that Yohji is becoming less tentative and frightened. Life as a sex toy, though, ee-yah...maybe he'll get to the point where he can henpeck Nagi a little, like Aya does Crawford? *picturing room rumbling* No? Well, it was just a thought, LOL.

I should be able to beta for you, if you like. I have a decent enough grasp of English, and I might be useful to bounce things off of. Let me know if you're interested, I'll try to be helpful.

Yay, more! Well done. :D

[the_rck]

Yohji has little choice but to adapt. I think it shows his strength that he's doing so well. He doesn't think he's strong, but he's doing better than a lot of people would. I do think that he could get to the point of having a lot of influence over Nagi. He has to tread carefully because of Nagi's issues and jealousy, but Nagi wants Yohji to be happy.

I'll take you up on the beta offer. I'm mostly interested in someone to bounce ideas off of. There's stuff that needs to be in chapter 20 that I haven't figured out how to fit in. I know it doesn't quite work. I'm just not sure how to fix it.

Is your e-mail in your profile? If not, I believe mine is.

The chapter is in .rtf format, but TextEdit files often do weird things when I send them to people, trying to open in bizarre formats in programs people didn't know they had. Would you rather I cut and pasted it into a .doc document?

[the_rck]

I didn't see an e-mail address in your profile, and mine doesn't seem to be displaying-- theredck at gmail dot com.