Beta needed for Sky High stories
Dec. 3rd, 2017 05:23 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
the_rckI'm looking for a beta reader for two more Sky High fics that follow on from the one I posted recently and the one I wrote last year for Fandom Stocking. The series is here on AO3. I'd say T all the way through. The first new story is Will's POV and about 4000 words in two parts. The second is Will's mother's POV, about 2000 words, and set several years later.
The first two, already posted, stories add up to slightly more than 2000 words and are necessary for the new ones to make sense.
I'd like to post both at once because the first leaves open a major question that's answered in the second. I don't think they should be chapters in the same story, especially not when the other two are separate.
The first two, already posted, stories add up to slightly more than 2000 words and are necessary for the new ones to make sense.
I'd like to post both at once because the first leaves open a major question that's answered in the second. I don't think they should be chapters in the same story, especially not when the other two are separate.
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Date: 2017-12-04 12:10 am (UTC)(The main thing, as before, is that I'd be a little more detailed about Layla's plans so it's clearer what Will is having moral conniptions about, and also why/how following those plans might change her and Warren into people who'd stop caring about Will's consent.)
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Date: 2017-12-04 12:13 am (UTC)If you have time and energy for commenting later, I'd be very pleased.
Except... You're going to make me figure out Layla's plans? ::laughs:: I just want to handwave and go, "Supervillain, smash!" Your way is better story, I know...
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Date: 2017-12-04 12:15 am (UTC)It also is very, very vague about what Layla and Warren have been doing.
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Date: 2017-12-04 12:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2017-12-04 01:46 am (UTC)