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Oct. 26th, 2011 10:29 amWriting is not going well. Last week, what with one thing and another, I lacked spoons for it. I had time but not energy. This week, I keep looking at the open document and becoming suddenly fascinated by other things. Some of that is that I know I need to cut about two thirds of what I wrote last month. It's aiming toward something that I now know isn't going to happen because I realized that, no matter what the rationale, the character in question simply wouldn't do that.
I managed to write a little last night, longhand, by taking a notebook with me to Delia's basketball practice. I had trouble focusing, but I had nothing else to do, so I wrote. There's another practice tonight. I plan to take the notebook again and see if I can write more.
I think the only thing to do with this section is to power through it. It's got such a weight of expectation and negative emotion that there's no way I'm going to enjoy writing it. I need this section for the chapter to be complete. This is all I need to finish it. Then I can start on the rewrite which will be relatively extensive, at least in some sections. I still have to figure out how to fit in physical descriptions of the two characters I'm introducing. I don't think about what things look like very much, so it's a real challenge to work visuals into the flow of the text.
(And yes, I'm writing journal entries rather than writing fic. I'll get to the fic soon. Really. Probably.)
I managed to write a little last night, longhand, by taking a notebook with me to Delia's basketball practice. I had trouble focusing, but I had nothing else to do, so I wrote. There's another practice tonight. I plan to take the notebook again and see if I can write more.
I think the only thing to do with this section is to power through it. It's got such a weight of expectation and negative emotion that there's no way I'm going to enjoy writing it. I need this section for the chapter to be complete. This is all I need to finish it. Then I can start on the rewrite which will be relatively extensive, at least in some sections. I still have to figure out how to fit in physical descriptions of the two characters I'm introducing. I don't think about what things look like very much, so it's a real challenge to work visuals into the flow of the text.
(And yes, I'm writing journal entries rather than writing fic. I'll get to the fic soon. Really. Probably.)
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Date: 2011-10-26 05:31 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-26 05:36 pm (UTC)I hope to have something for beta reading soon. I may not get around to incorporating the suggestions you've already made this time out, but I still hope to.
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Date: 2011-10-26 11:51 pm (UTC)I am so easily distracted at home; I just cannot do anything there!
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Date: 2011-10-27 11:14 am (UTC)